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Jan 18, 2013 0:38:00 GMT -5
Post by Chidorifool101 on Jan 18, 2013 0:38:00 GMT -5
Thanks a lot for the help guys. You're all so fabulous :3
If you really are free I could post the entire essay, but I don't want to burden you guys with boring stuff like this essay. I also really should get to bed considering it's nearly one in the morning here and this whole week I've been living off of 4 hours a night.
But I really REALLY appreciate you helping me out. Thesis statements are just a pain for me to write up.
Also, with some of the points you said about explaining certain words, I have done that in the rest of the essay, so I think it should all be good.
Overall I'm pretty happy with how it came out, and with the help of you guys, it seems so much better. So again, thank you a lot *huggles*
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Jan 18, 2013 1:06:28 GMT -5
Post by kueller917 on Jan 18, 2013 1:06:28 GMT -5
Go ahead and post it. I have a long weekend anyways and I'm taking a mandatory writing class anyways so I'm retaining all that information.
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Jan 18, 2013 20:13:31 GMT -5
Post by wtfhoward on Jan 18, 2013 20:13:31 GMT -5
I am the grammar queen.
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Jan 18, 2013 21:34:04 GMT -5
Post by kueller917 on Jan 18, 2013 21:34:04 GMT -5
You are. I didn't even catch half of the mistakes you pointed out, lol
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Jan 19, 2013 1:51:26 GMT -5
Post by wtfhoward on Jan 19, 2013 1:51:26 GMT -5
 Yay me. |
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Jan 19, 2013 12:55:10 GMT -5
Post by Princess of Promise on Jan 19, 2013 12:55:10 GMT -5
Gosh I would have no idea how to help with that. Our teachers baby us and don't bother teachin us new crap but instead they go over what we know already for at least 17 standardized tests a year that do absolutely nothing to indicate academic performance. :noey:
/rant is over
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Jan 19, 2013 22:14:47 GMT -5
Post by Chidorifool101 on Jan 19, 2013 22:14:47 GMT -5
K: I already passed the essay in, but if you would still like to read it, I could paste it here. I'm sorry about not getting your message in time though. I just really needed to sleep  |
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Jan 19, 2013 23:22:52 GMT -5
Post by wtfhoward on Jan 19, 2013 23:22:52 GMT -5
Well, let's hope you get a good grade!
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Jan 20, 2013 14:00:53 GMT -5
Post by Chidorifool101 on Jan 20, 2013 14:00:53 GMT -5
I hope so too. I will literally blow up on this teacher if I get a bad grade.
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Jan 20, 2013 18:59:17 GMT -5
Post by wtfhoward on Jan 20, 2013 18:59:17 GMT -5
Don't die.
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Jan 21, 2013 14:02:03 GMT -5
Post by Chidorifool101 on Jan 21, 2013 14:02:03 GMT -5
It might happen. History, my favorite subject in school, might be the death of me.
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Jan 21, 2013 14:42:17 GMT -5
Post by wtfhoward on Jan 21, 2013 14:42:17 GMT -5
Then you'd be...  History. YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH |
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Jan 21, 2013 17:21:52 GMT -5
Post by Princess of Promise on Jan 21, 2013 17:21:52 GMT -5
It might happen. History, my favorite subject in school, might be the death of me. i see what you did there |
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Jan 21, 2013 22:56:09 GMT -5
Post by Chidorifool101 on Jan 21, 2013 22:56:09 GMT -5
Em:  oh my gosh. I love Horatio. You just made my day. Sam: Why, yes.. yes you did  ALSO. I don't mean to be so annoying about school on here, but would anyone like to help me chop down this script for history that needs to be EXACTLY 500 WORDS??! So far, I've cut down nearly 200 words, and it's getting to the point where I can barely do anything else. I'm over by 28 words. So close, I know. |
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Jan 22, 2013 0:00:56 GMT -5
Post by wtfhoward on Jan 22, 2013 0:00:56 GMT -5
Oh God. try taking out "that"s. most of them are useless.
horatio?
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